Rewrite the sentences from Task
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Consider using significant grammatical features (Simple past tense,Temporal sequence and temporal conjunction, Specific participants, Actionverbs, Third person) as you may need to write longer sentences and add extra information. Make sure you put the sentences chronologically.
As
president, Soekarno was highly respected by the leaders of countries in the
world at that time. Soekarno was born in Surabaya precisely on June 6, 1901
with the real name Koesno Sosrodihardjo. He was a child who excelled since
childhood, even Soekarno was able to master so many languages that he was
known for his intelligence in the eyes of the world. Next is the data of
Soekarno.
Soekarno's Biography
• Full name: Ir. Soekarno
• Nickname: Bung Karno
• First name: Kusno
• Place, date of birth: Blitar, June 6, 1901
• Islam
• Wife Name:
•
Fatmawati
•
Hartini
•
Ratna Sari Dewi
Child Name:
• Guntur, Megawati, Rachmawati, Sukmawati, Guruh (from Fatmawati)
• Taufan, Bayu (from Hartini)
• Kartika (from Ratna Sari Dewi)
Education:
• HIS in Surabaya
• Hoogere Burger School (HBS)
• Technische Hoogeschool (THS) in Bandung
Died: June 21, 1970
Buried: Blitar, East Java
Bung
Karno was a popular name from Soekarno. Born on June 6, 1901 in Blitar, East
Java. When Soekarno was small, he did not live with his parents in Blitar. He
lived with his grandfather named Raden Hardjokromo in Tulung Agung, East Java.
Soekarno even went to school there even though it wasn't finished, because he
had to come along with his parents who at that time moved to Mojokerto. In
Mojokerto, Soekarno was then schooled at the Eerste Inlandse School where his
father also worked there as a teacher. But then he was transferred in 1911 to
ELS which was at the level of elementary school to be prepared to enter at the
HBS in Surabaya. After graduating and attending HBS in 1915, Soekarno then
lived in the house of Haji Oemar Said Tjokroaminoto or HOS Cokroaminoto who was
a friend of Soekarno's father. It was Soekarno who knew the world of struggle
which made him a true fighter.
On
August 17, 1945, Soekarno and Mohammad Hatta proclaimed Indonesian independence
from Japanese occupation where on this date it was also celebrated as
Indonesian Independence Day which also made Soekarno appointed as Indonesia's
first president. In Soekarno's biography, he succeeded in forming Pancasila
with his team as the basis of the Indonesian state.
Then
on August 18, 1945, the PPKI then appointed the first President and Vice
President of the Republic of Indonesia, Soekarno and Moh Hatta. This
appointment was later confirmed on August 29, 1945 by KNIP. Only recently
became President, Soekarno on September 19, 1945 was able to solve the problem
without the bloodshed that existed at Ikada Field where there were 200 thousand
more Jakarta people who planned to clash with Japanese forces with weapons that
were still complete.
That
is the biography of Soekarno who can be an example of the struggle from
childhood to become the father of Indonesia's first president known to the
world. Hopefully Soekarno's biography can be useful and make you admire the figure
of the father of our first president.
Education of Ir Soekarno
Soekarno Muda 1922
When
in Mojokerto, Ir Soekarno's father sent a small Soekarno to the place where his
father became a teacher. But in 1911 his father transferred Sukarno to an ELS school
or Europeesche Lagere School which was intended so that later Soekarno could
easily enter HBS or Hogere Burger School in Surabaya. After finishing school at
Hogere Burger School in 1915, Soekarno then stayed with Haji Oemar Said
Tjokroaminoto or now many are more familiar with the name H.O.S Cokroaminoto
where he was a friend of Sukarno's father who was also known to be the founder
of the Islamic Society.
After
completing his education at Hogere Burger School in 1921, then Soekarno moved
to Bandung and then stayed with Haji Sanusi who then went on to study at THS or
the Technische Hooge School in the civil engineering department where he has
now become an ITB and then graduated on May 25, 1926 so he got the title of
Engineer or Ir.
Entering
the period of the national movement where in 1926 young Soekarno founded the
Algemene Studie Club in Bandung. It turned out that this organization became
the beginning of establishing the Indonesian National Party which was founded
in 1927. Furthermore, Soekarno's activities in the Indonesian National Party
caused him to be arrested by Shopping in December 1929 and then brought up a
phenomenal pledoi at that time, Indonesia Sues. He was later released on 31
December 1931.
Subsequently Soekarno joined the Indonesian or
Partindo Party in July 1932 where the party was a fraction of the Indonesian
National Party. Because of this activity, Soekarno was again arrested in August
1933 and then exiled to Flores. In this condition, Soekarno was almost
forgotten by national leaders because of its remote and isolated location. Even
so, the spirit of Sukarno never collapsed even though in exile that could be
implied from each letter to Ahmad Hassan who was a teacher of Islamic Unity.
During the exile, Soekarno was transferred to Bengkulu Province in 1938.
Soekarno was free during the Japanese occupation in 1942.
Although there were many services from President
Soekarno, he also experienced a downturn which began when he separated from
Vice President Moh Hatta in 1956 due to Moh Hatta's resignation from Indonesian
politics. Not to mention the number of rebellions from separatists and
occurring in the territory of Indonesia. The peak of this rebellion also
occurred with the G 30S PKI which made President Soekarno unable to fulfill his
dream to make the Indonesian people prosperous and prosperous.
After that Soekarno experienced the isolation carried
out by the successor President namely Suharto. The old Soekarno was often sick
and finally died on June 21, 1970 in Jakarta, precisely at Wisma Yaso. His body
was buried in Blitar and until now it has become an icon of Blitar. Every year,
millions of tourists are often visited by tourists both from within and outside
the country, especially when there are haul of Bung Karno.
President Soekarno's
award on May 24, 2956 in New York, United States.
During his life, Soekarno received many awards
starting from the Honoris Causa Doctorate title which was obtained from 26
universities from home and abroad. He also received an award in the form of a
first-class star namely The Order of the Supreme Companions which was given by
Thabo Mbeki, the President of South Africa because he was able to develop
solidarity internationally in order to fight against forms of oppression from
developed countries. That is a bit of the biography of Soekarno, the Proclaimer
of Indonesia's pride that can be used as learning material for all Indonesian people
for their perseverance, enthusiasm and intelligence in order to build the
country.
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Checking your writing
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Action verbs
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Third person
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