Supposed that
you are in the Human Resource Department at Sun. Your task is to decide which
of these three letters best matches and elaborates your needs as highlighted in
the job description and requirements. Review and evaluate the content of these
letters on the basis of:
·
What your
company are looking for in an employee;
·
The
requirements of the position;
·
The
persuasiveness of evidence provided by the applicants
My answer
I will choose
the third application letter. The application letter has already fulfill all
the requirements listed in the advertisement, they are:
a. Our company is looking for a summer
intern position as a Web Technologist
b. The applicant writes the code of
requisition number of CB974BA26 on her letter.
c. The applicant has excellent
qualifications for the position.
Evidences:
“As you can see from my résumé, my previous work experience has prepared
me for this position. I have had lots of experience with Web related
activities. I have installed, configured, and maintained a Web server for both
the Software Development Lab at NCSU and for the MGSC at IBM. I am the Web
Master of the home pages for both the MGSC Department at IBM and for the
Navigators at Duke. I have acquired lots of programming experiences. I wrote
CGI's for IBM and developed the Mechanical Technology Center Product Manager for
one of IBM's departments. I had the opportunity to experience the software
engineering development process and write C++ code during a co-op with Federal
Express. These experiences have sufficiently prepared me with the
qualifications necessary for this position.”
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